Monday, October 22, 2012

part of narrative

                My name is Chandler and I have selected to interview my father, Michael about his time growing up. I am 16 years old and a junior at (OUR)  High school that is highly involved in sports. I choose to interview my dad because out of all my family members I have the closest relationship with him and share most my experiences with him. Not only that but he shares interesting Experiences having moved from a foreign country

Is this long enough?
Does this 1st paragraph make you want to continue?
What else could I add to improve my writing?

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